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This was a great read. Reminds me of my days on the farm in the past.

Like the conversational style, more like you're talking to me personally.

However I've few observations;

1. Use simple words. Replace most agric jargons for ease of reading for non agric readers or science background.

2. Paragraph must not exceed for sentences, less is better. Break long paragraph into smaller ones, for easy flow of reading. Like I'm doing with this whole comment.

Overall it was an enjoyable read. Cheers.

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